early morning - warmth 


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 Eddy Ng (15883)

a son pushes his father's bike as they walk home together after shopping at the local market....hey Guys! thanks for the nice easy comments. How about some serious critique? Bp Kristupa told me to encourage u guys to REALLY CRITIQUE. So if u like it or dont like it, tell me why. What are the strong elements or weak elements in the image? What will you do differently? 3TD is ok too....just explain.....NOTHING is taken personally. Great educated comments Bp Kristupa.....I agree with you totally. Will post another tomorrow (my upload image quota full for today) which might address the very valid points that you have mentioned.

  • Nilai foto: 58
  • Dilihat: 325
  • Waktu upload: Selasa, 09 Sep 2003
  • Lokasi: Cambodia,
Shooting Data
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  • ISO: 0
  • Kamera: Contax G2 *
  • Filter: orange
  • * Masih menggunakan daftar alat lama yang mungkin tidak akurat.
Kritik dan Komentar
 Muchamad Noor Eva A (56769)

21 tahun yang lalu

nice picture.....too bad the weel is croped

 Nina Ari Bates (4974)

21 tahun yang lalu

Dont you think its a bit "crowded"?

 Tiko Arisetiyarto (5315)

21 tahun yang lalu

great b&w..

 Setiadi Darmawan ,kiat (90413)

21 tahun yang lalu

nice bw

 Irwansyah S (52460)

21 tahun yang lalu

I like busy-ness look on your shot. Cropped shadow on the left side, just to add eagerness to overall scene. Stepped women there, just to guide my eye where they're forwarding.

 susilo w. (50869)

21 tahun yang lalu

Nice picture....

 Kristupa W Saragih (176444)

21 tahun yang lalu

Interesting object What really distracts is the harsh light that looks relatively frontal and almost flat Overall, the photo looks "too busy" without any reason why you chose this kind of DOF The use of orange filter has added contrast too much, and looks like both shadow and highlight area are sacrificed If I were with you at that time, I might took position in front of you to capture the boy and old man in backlighting condition and maximized rim lights Hence, I might be able to capture a bit more expressions on their faces (if there's any shown) From this choice of angle, you missed your opportunity to use the shadows as an addition to composition elements, because you (accidentaly?) cropped it

 A. Raditya Pratistha D,Ndoro Tuan (44548)

21 tahun yang lalu

i agree with Azman

 Ray Dave (25060)

21 tahun yang lalu

Well composed ..

 Azman Amir (6198)

21 tahun yang lalu

i prefer more shadows of the boy and his bike.

 Robert Edward Sabandar (2731)

21 tahun yang lalu

High contrast make the picture more interesting...

 Chandra SB (41373)

21 tahun yang lalu

nice bewe

 Bambang Indrayoto (2642)

21 tahun yang lalu

Like always, I admire your work

 Wiryo Hartoyo (29082)

21 tahun yang lalu

Very nice BW

JUMAR WINARSO (844)

21 tahun yang lalu

klasik........ kok pada upload foto sepeda ya?

 Hilman Patria (18646)

21 tahun yang lalu

great bw.. well composed..