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Eddy Ng (15883)
experimental work with long shadows. Please critique TU or TD is ok...give learning comments. I dont want just \'its good\' or \'its lousy\'. Please explain your feelings. Thank you for honest comments all! Appreciated! As I said, its experiment...testing
21 tahun yang lalu
simple object but you capture it well ...
bagus, waktu yg tepat menekan shutter
Why dont U try to take the picture from a top of a building, so we can see the shape of the shadow more clearly,,, IMHO.
I'd rather not to have that crowded background......And the lady's face...? Mmm....too 'shadowy'!
Pak, background is distracting. I'd rather crop the picture as far as the tire of the car. Leaving only the long shadow, and the headless walking fat lady along with headless bikeman. Keep posting Pak! *have you considered eXpan?*
POInya kabur... Salam
pak, regardless of your photo title, i rather focus to walking lady with her long shadow, and the lady in bicycle as well and isolate them from rest, these object having more power to attract
the DOF you choose was correct. the angle you stood at was not correct. the motion of the woman and the lady on her bicycle supposed to be placed on the left of this frame or you may wait for a few second for the motorcycle until they got into the middle of this frame. hopefully undeerstood. nice work anyway...because there's no cure for curiosity without an attempt. good luck Then..!!!
i couldn't see the point of interest of this pic,IMHO it would be nice if you could pick up one of the subject as an object.
sejujurnya ini foto biasa aja, maksud saya hanya seperti foto dokumentasi aja.. maaf
Where's the point of interest
Personally I dont get the "street of life" tag line. More prominent focus of interest prob?
how about cropping ? More to the lady , bicycle & the nice long shadow .. Great Shoot
not well composed.. would be better if u omitted or blured cars and motocycles in the left.. POI?.. imho... Bagaimana kalo Bahasa Indonesia? Anda bisa menangkap maksudnya?
photo would be nice if the bicycle and lady would walk into the picture....with the long shadows...
