Hak cipta karya foto ada pada fotografer dan dilindungi oleh undang-undang.
Bram Pribadi (33)
20 tahun yang lalu
Wow... keren bo... kalo boleh usul Bung Bram, sekalian di retouch bisa di kasih cloud tuh di langit-nya... plus croppingnya IMHO lebih baik tembok-nya di buang aja, sisakan garis mendatar-nya saja.
I have always loved this type of spiral staircase found behind old chinese shophouses in Singapore! They have become a true witness of the things that were happening in the good ol' days... Although all is well in your composition, may I suggest that you review Ansel Adams work to get a feel of what it's like to see a nice balance between various middle gray tones that you are lacking... (the tones have not kicked me hard enough!) Yes, burning and dodging in manual technique is a necessity for your photo above. It's really hard to explain what it's like to have a good tone balance. Look for Ansel Adams photos in the library then you will appreciate a well-balanced contrast that I meant.
21 tahun yang lalu
bagus...
komposisinya menarik, gedung sebelah kiri agak mengganggu...
Obyek yg menarik, warna yg menarik, kritik: gedungnya sebaiknya jangan dibuat miring. Lebih fokus pada tangganya, bangunan di belakang kiri jangan diikutkan.
angle-nya TOB
kalo BW mungkin lebih bagus dengan nambah efek awan di bagian atas yg kosong
komposisinya menarik..
manipulasi komputernya tidak ada keterangan, jadi bingung mau komentar apa ya?.....
Komposisinya bagus, dgn sephia OK
